Wednesday, September 15, 2010

Homecoming, with Turtle

Many people from all parts of the world migrate to America in search of a better life. Junot Diaz was one of those people. Junot and his family moved from the Dominican Republic when he was only six years old. I can only imagine how difficult it must be; having to pack your essential belongings and relocating to an unfamiliar area, leaving everything else behind. When Diaz and his family settled in America, the challenge had only just begun. Junot left his friends behind and was given no choice but to make new ones. Diaz was accustomed to speaking Spanish in the Dominican Republic, but now he had to learn the English language. To make it all worse, Junot had family troubles. He was burdened emotionally and financially due to his father’s abandonment and his brother’s battle against Leukemia.
After years spent in America, Diaz returned to the Dominican Republic in an attempt to reconnect with his roots. Diaz was disheartened to discover that he was unfamiliar with his native land. His ability to speak Spanish was poor and he was not able to knowledgably use public transportation to travel from one location to another. Also, there was no one available to guide him through his trip since all of his relatives came to the United States at that time. In the reading, Diaz says “ Traveling the third-world is challenging enough…..a boyfriend who is worried that he no longer “fits in” at “home” that every little incident and interaction is sifted for rejection”. I can definitely recognize the great disappointment he must have felt; the sense of belonging he so badly wanted and yet, could not attain.
I commend Diaz for using his past experiences in his writing. I like how he made his essay “Homecoming, with Turtle” not too lengthy and not too short. It was long enough to provide his readers the information needed to be able to comprehend his story and short enough to prevent them from becoming weary and losing interest. I also liked how he uses Spanish dialect in “Homecoming, with the Turtle”. To help his non-Spanish speaking readers understand the story, Diaz translated the Spanish vocabulary at the bottom of each page. His use of both formal and informal writing brought more practicality to his essay and gave me a greater connection to the story.

4 comments:

  1. I really like how your phrased Diaz moving from the Dominican Republic to America; "having to pack your essential belongings and relocating to an unfamiliar area, leaving everything else behind" seems to really sum everything up in one simple sentence. I also enjoyed how you mentioned "no one available to guide him through his trip since all of his relatives came to the United States "; that makes me think of Diaz returning to the Dominican Republic not just as a difficulty in traversing the area as an almost stranger, but also dealing with the fact that he had no famly to help him.

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  2. I like how you point out that Diaz made his story a reasonable length, he was able to express his life story in a well descriptive yet decent length piece so that his readers did not get bored. You caught the main idea of how Diaz overcame struggles for his entire life, he has never given up and has always kept trying to make things better even after learning the hard way each time.

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  3. I never really looked at this story in your point of view. I had expected it to be longer so i didn't really give it a chance to fully look into everything that he had to go through. My parents had migrated to America 25 years ago for a better live and after listening to all their hardships, i can understand what Diaz probably had to go through. And the way he translated things at the bottom is a smart idea for people who don't understand english as much as we do.

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  4. Katia,

    Nice job here. You do a very nice job including a quote that captures a very central idea of the story. I really like how you mentioned Diaz's struggle and need to belong. I also am glad you mentioned how he blends informal speech with a more formal writing tone. It's an important observation and something he does in a very unique way.

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